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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-10-31 03:03 PM




With softly-thistled quill
I ink poetic words-at-will
Knowing they will land
in hues of falling leaves
to color your day with
love~

As the down of the meadow
gathers kaleidoscopic glow
We will run full-circle
in the ever-know
of love~

All the shades of foreverly true
will pile in leaves meant for jumping-joy
We will leap through memoried keep
of love~

When again the wind beckons Fall
in colorful array
of day well-done
We will sit and speak of
love~

Sighing at the sight
of parchmented flight
As we await the come of a night
of love~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-10-31 03:08 PM


Dear Marge, this is so full of true love and so very lovingly presented.

A joy to read! And a note that will be received with an accelerated heartbeat, no doubt!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


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2 posted 2004-10-31 03:52 PM


How lovely Marge..
and your leaves are gorgeous.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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3 posted 2004-10-31 04:51 PM


Beautiful poem...

~Alli~

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Martie
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4 posted 2004-10-31 04:52 PM


Marge/sis

There is something very special, it's true
about a love note shared with caring, from you!  

Magnus
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5 posted 2004-10-31 05:00 PM


The special is you,  and the gift is this.
Thanx Marge, bunches.

Betty
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6 posted 2004-10-31 05:16 PM


Marge this is so beautiful. I just love it.
Love ya,
Betty

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7 posted 2004-10-31 05:34 PM


Dear Marge:

How lovely!  The beauty is, that true love knows no season, but is always steadfast, as you know!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2004-10-31 06:18 PM


Marge,
Ah, such thoughts are held close.
be well my friend.
Doc

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9 posted 2004-10-31 06:42 PM


Marge, this is such a beautiful write, and I loved those colors!
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10 posted 2004-10-31 08:17 PM


Mama Marge, you are beautiful
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-10-31 09:10 PM


Marge,
Beautiful write.

SmartChick
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12 posted 2004-10-31 09:22 PM


Beautiful Marge!
HopeS
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13 posted 2004-10-31 10:38 PM


Marge , this is such a beautiful written love note and gift , a true treasure

Hope

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14 posted 2004-11-01 08:46 AM


Marge ... the love that flows out of this piece brought tears. A beautiful write and a beautiful pesentation.

Definitely a keeper.

huggles dear friend, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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15 posted 2004-11-01 09:15 AM


like they all said, beautiful, just as you


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16 posted 2004-11-01 11:46 AM


As always a lovely note...


M

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