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Eons Twill
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Eons Twill |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Eons Twill Chaos is the master prime Painted on a canvas time Pain and pleasure strokes of will Pen the pen of eon’s twill Played upon an egos lure Woven on a cloth of tour Wrapped around a shawl of goal The fire of a living soul And empathy and sympathy Sailing on Eternals Sea Guided by a chaos star The distance of horizons far It is to me a eulogy An agent of anthology A factor much beyond my stir More than mist it is a blur Chaos is the master prime Painted on a canvases time |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Impressive write dear Seymour! Only an apparent chaos, but we can't grasp the eons' vastness ... while we are limited to our earthly embodiment. Highly appreciated your beautiful Sunday creation, dear Sy. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chaos is the master prime Painted on a canvases time ~*~ Your talents are impeccable, Sy. Good Sunday Morning, my friend.   |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I just LOVE READING YOU~  Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Seymour...love this. But then how could I not? Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy this is a masterpiece. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! It's so good to awaken to one of your writes packed with pearls of wisdom! And this one is excellent! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And empathy and sympathy Sailing on Eternals Sea Guided by a chaos star The distance of horizons far It is to me a eulogy An agent of anthology A factor much beyond my stir More than mist it is a blur Chaos is the master prime Painted on a canvases time =============================== and you are the poet prime with rhymes sublime It is to me a eulogy An agent of anthology could those lines be any cooler???? me thinks not much is "beyond your stir"  *winkiewinkie*  Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This piece certainly does have many basic emotions swirling within...damn the torpedoes, full speed ahead!!!! |
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