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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2004-10-31 12:32 PM



Yearning Press Ascends Fervent Sliding Caress

Yearning press ascends fervent sliding caress.
Melding entices.
In a flurry of necessity our clothes dismissed.
Augmented groans reverberate into obscurity,
as stars scintillate overhead.
I suffocate.
Press your lips to mine;
exhale through me,
for I yearn to be clothed in ardent lashes,
lips painted with wisteria kisses.
I would cleave to eroticism,
cling to carnality,
with no need of symmetry.
Here in these hinterlands,
let the raven sky hold our moans.
Betwixt thighs of hunger we conceal magnolia sensuality—
you the eclipsed sun to my moon.
Covenants will be fettered from lip to ear,
‘til the daystar drinks this witching hour,
and we are but finger painting, “I love you.”

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2004 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-10-31 06:57 AM


Wonderfully passionate write.

"I love you" is what makes this play so divine.

Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-10-31 07:20 AM


EvocativeVerse2,
That's a sexy Halloween. LOL Enjoyed

EvocativeVerse2
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3 posted 2004-10-31 09:49 AM


Thank-you Margherita...that is kind of you to say.

Hey Seymour. Glad you stopped in for a read. This one has taken days to put together and I am still not happy with the end result. Seems like I forgot to say something...just not sure what it was my heart wanted to say.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
4 posted 2004-10-31 11:42 AM


Oh My Dear Kevin,
  You sent this heart to racing.
I love this piece,will add it to all your others.

Happy Halloween.

Hugs

Amour Vous Always,
  

Within this heart you'll find love

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-10-31 11:49 AM


My my, this is sooooo yummie - sensual, carnal, passionate - I love to read a man who feels this way - stirring my friend -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
6 posted 2004-10-31 09:28 PM


What can I say ;-)

You know me sweetie

hugs

Amour Vous
Always

Within this heart you'll find love

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