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November In My SouL
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November In My SouL |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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Long intervals of silence weave incandescent cobwebs upon the sleeves of my soul as it Novembers a frosty precision of silk light, wingspans that divide into Rorschach’s, volumes and volumes of inky rainshadows and slender angels ariot, disquiet among the anxious ghosts of the heart that depart the same as a bruise would leave the body, supplicant to the lure of flame, one fierce and tender burning of wings, through the membrane of veined mist and smoke and the fiery scripture of slurs inscribed just beneath the tight, infected drumskin that pours forth its incurable heat red beating red my blood, shoved translucent into a bent syringe of glassy images that cringe their thirsty candescence into thought, obedient only to this hunger I raise in voices full of blades that fade hiltdeep into my body, lured by the same fine madness that in my fever burns a hot, delirious November in my soul. 2004 copyright babygirLPress **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"wingspans that divide into Rorschach’s," this appeals to the "crazy" in me, and the reference to bruise colors? smiling wide it always occurred to me that Autumn leaves matched the array of bruises... *brava* yet again |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
James&Serenity... thanks so much for stopping by to read... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I read this last night at the witching hour, and then again this morning, and it remains breath tdaking no matter by which light it is read. Your talent is simply exquisite. You have a remarkable grasp of language and I would just like to applaud your talent. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
babygirlwlove Now that is soul searching. Enjoyed |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
November, and you still manage to include your "drums", "flame" and "thirst". Great reading! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lol wranx...I imagine the day the drums stop, so does my heart from beating...lol...always present (thank goodness)...lol...and the fire...well...what is to give light they say, must endure the burning.... lol thanks for checking this out, love... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Seymour & Evocative Verse... thanks so much for stopping in on this... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Long intervals of silence weave incandescent cobwebs upon the sleeves of my soul as it Novembers a frosty precision of silk light, wingspans that divide into Rorschach’s, volumes and volumes of inky rainshadows and slender angels ariot, disquiet among the anxious ghosts of the heart well done ma'am... well done |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thanks, Chief.... **babyblu** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well can't wait until December gets in there too  Oh man, save us from Wranx when he sees these lines, I know the Yeti is gonna simply love these ones:through the membrane of veined mist and smoke and the fiery scripture of slurs inscribed just beneath the tight, infected drumskin Him and his drums! Beautifully done but then we are growing to expect perfection attached to your name. No pressure there right? |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
A complex weave . . . Enjoyed! sag |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Mysteria... lol..you are a doll....no, no pressure at all...lol thanks, love... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
SaG~ thanks for checking this out... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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