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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-30 07:48 AM


I put my jeans in the guitar case
wanna be suitcase
with my long sleeve t
and the cowboy hat

so they would be ready
at the other end
when some holy roller
put the ends back in

my rut and I called it home
for tattoos and silver
and some bones that had bends
where they went in wrong places

to hook up with other bones
or between some ends
where boots went under
the drape at the window

or were left outside
already headed toward the sun
if it rose on some next morning
when the iron horse had the need

to breathe the lines of a new freeway
____________

Dark

scribblenote: just hangin with some ol scooter trash, pavin the road with boot scoot bs

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-30-2004 09:36 AM).]

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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-10-30 08:25 AM



..."on the road again..."

Everyone needs their horse,
and everyone likes to watch the
cowboys strut by...

even 150 years later...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-10-30 09:56 AM


sounds like some good time history is about to be made Dark.  Tis always a good day to ride m'friend....enjoyed this and hope you enjoy the time spent!  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-10-30 11:22 AM


I like the flavor of this D - I love it when I glimpse life through your eyes and see sides to things I'd not looked at before -

Good Morning - and hugs to you - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-10-30 12:12 PM


oh darn it, no freeways
in my neck of the woods

but I'm tryin' on your
just keep ridin'
no matter what happens

K

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-10-30 12:46 PM


very cool
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