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exhale
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0 posted 2004-10-29 09:08 PM


the night passes by with a breeze of perfume
as she tells me she's lonely
lonely but content

i'll laugh with the stars
sit on the cold cement
and tell her love is air

"mother mother wake up please."

and she'll cry the river to drown herself.

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1 posted 2004-10-30 01:02 AM


sad.....but so well written....

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Susan
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2 posted 2004-10-31 12:07 PM


  

Hugs - Susan

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-31 01:53 PM


So sad yet an awesome write!
Hugs~

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4 posted 2004-10-31 05:04 PM




As all of them have said - great write...but so sad.


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passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-10-31 08:41 PM



ecrivan
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6 posted 2004-11-02 09:37 AM


I'd like Mom to live forever happily but I know sad to say...time has another agenda


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