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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-10-29 07:48 PM


High Surf Advisory
South Shore


Having some eight to ten foot
waves on the South Shore today.
Die hard surfers wouldn't let
something as mundane as work
keep them away.

Grabbing my board and heading
for the shores of Waikiki.
Ten foot waves and five foot
six surfer babes are awaiting
my surfboard and me.


JamesLee
October28
2004

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2004-10-30 09:58 AM


Wow .... dear James, Waikiki seems such a charming place!

Funny, that there is the feminine element always present, even when you are attracted by the fantastic Surf waves ...

Romantic to the bone!

Love, Margherita

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-10-30 03:26 PM


Flying by the sound of it

Liked the words as well

Dave

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2004-10-30 05:16 PM


Hey James

Sounds like you're in for a fine time.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-10-30 10:27 PM


Thank you Margherita, Dave and Sue for the nice responses...
Margherita...I'm especially programmed to enjoy the feminine species...James

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