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abbymatilda
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since 2003-12-22
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0 posted 2004-10-29 06:58 PM


Here is a poem I wrote a few years ago. I felt it was appropriate on the blustery autumn day

Autumn in the Church of My Soul

It's autumn
In the Church of My Soul
And the wind blows so fiercely
All the hymnals fly open
And into the aisle
(Just because of your smile)
As the leaves swirl in armies
And the trees howl our song:

"Wherever you are
Is where I belong"


© Copyright 2004 Abby Powell - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-10-29 07:01 PM


OMG!  Abby this is outstanding!  BRAVA!  
abbymatilda
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2 posted 2004-10-29 07:02 PM


Mom, you've heard this one eight million times. This isn't what  was referring to in my e-mail!
Ab

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-10-29 07:10 PM


I know, but I wanted to post.  I posted on your other one, too.  I'm gonna start back to work when Dad gets home cause the issue is due tomorrow....got it back from the printers...now we have to pull another all-nighter....lol   Well, I've reached my limit I think on posting on this one.  I think the limit is two (but I'm not really sure).  luv ya, M
GG
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4 posted 2004-10-29 07:13 PM


Love this! I especially like how you wrapped it up so perfectly in the ending and brought all the pictures and emotions together. Well done!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2004-10-29 07:41 PM


Enjoyed...James
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