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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-10-29 11:52 AM


Oh, Imbued with life
I met you in likeness
Long ago
Embarking sunny side up
Large numbers became frontier
And a thought occurred to me
I found wide grassy lawns
You were the advocate
Of ancient prophesy
Numbing feathery
Where time drifts
Revealing hidden charm
Aroma continued for hours
Such happiness
Creeping up on me
Like a slow siesta
Shaping a song stilled mystery
Giving new to the profit in you
Oh, time’s lasting measure will
Breath into our souls
A steed swirling rivers edge
Peace congeals
Arabian nights obey
I obey
Your pyramidal temple
On our bed
Of diamond shaped religion
Dripping
Splashing
Melting
Straining to listen
Pensive intrinsic
In a childhood world
Your words of love
Threading
Stirring
Touching
weaving
Feelings
Receiving & believing your visions
Blending like
Variegated leaves
Misted in summer’s beauty
Nestling in the small of your back
Your unwavering gaze
Nussels my nakedness
Then
Whispers my name
Softly
Gently
With Desire
Burning
Alive
Impatient
Of firm mindset
Childhood memory
Becomes butterflies
Iridescent wings
Soaring with the wind
Of meditation
Where you and I
Met
Before
Us


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Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
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1 posted 2004-10-29 01:37 PM


Receiving & believing your visions
Blending like
Variegated leaves
Misted in summer’s beauty
Nestling in the small of your back
Your unwavering gaze
Nussels my nakedness
Then
Whispers my name
very nice...

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-10-29 03:42 PM


The Zen Art of Motor Mechanics this is not.

I had three hours of exercises before I could add these words

Clouds drifted gently overhead
Basking in the heat of a day
Exploring visions of warmth

It wasn't too bad outside either Lee

Dave


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2004-10-29 08:46 PM


you could converse with someone for hours and
walk away uneffected
or just simply walk in silence and just 'know'
your words speak of 'knowing'

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2005-01-26 06:58 PM


...B e a u t I f u l...
   Love song.

JL



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