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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-29 08:28 AM


you drew boys
when you were little
like sticky bugs
that wanted to be freckles
on your skin

but you out ran them
with your fleet foot shoes
and they just sat under trees
and waited to be bigger
or for you to want shade

and candy or toys
they said they had many
and theirs was chocolate
with chocolate coating
and chocolate wrappers too

you were tempted then
in the islands of sin
but came back only hungry
and looked under the trees
for the boys and the toys

and now you are the candy store


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Dark

(satin series)

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Lady In White
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since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799
USA
1 posted 2004-10-29 08:30 AM



Sometimes when we grow up,
we find out we are who we
dreamed we would be...

Enjoying your series, Sir.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-10-29 08:40 AM


guilty as charged.......
boys become men becoming boys once again.......
can't stay away as much as i try.....you wrote me well .......lol

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-10-29 08:47 AM


It is quite apparent that you wrote this poem with our Inked One in mind.  lol I jest! I just read her reply and couldn't resist!

I for one, will always be as a kid in a candy store!

Enjoyed your musings this morning!


LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-10-29 08:47 AM


well, it's nice to be both...isn't it...like an entire host to an open world...and I hope so...the child in me will always remain...
AND I NEVER BECOME MY MOTHER....HEHEHHEHE

Candidly, my mother has a lot of good qualities....she's just forgotten the child which lays in waiting...but at times, you can coax her out...

Smiles and hugs, this one was nice
Happy Friday and Happy Halloween

Whooooooooo, "I vant to drink your blood"
ya ah ha ha ha ha ha...
Can you guess?
Yup, Dracula with curves

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-10-29 10:15 AM


Mmmmm - dark - I like this SATIN series - this one takes me back to my childhood

Ever hear the Rosemary Clooney song - common' to my house, common' common', I'm a gonna give you candy -

Good Morning D -  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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