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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-10-29 08:01 AM


I lie in bed with pen in hand,
Poised above blank page.
Thoughts are streaming through my head,
From silly words to sage.

I yearn to write the perfect poem,
That would be loved by all.
But surely that's impossible,
And would be an order tall.

I suppose the thing for me to do,
Is to write to please myself.
Dreaming that my books of poems
Will one day fill a shelf.

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-10-29 08:05 AM


awwww, of course they have and will continue to do so, the shelves of our hearts and mind...

Poetess, this was lovely

Morning!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-10-29 08:11 AM


Earth Angel
Didn't want to mention this but I do the same thing. Morning sweet.

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-10-29 08:14 AM


Dear Linda, every poet jotting down his thoughts surely deep inside - not all will admit this! - yearns for the birth of an extraordinary poem.

But we can't be loved by all, this is indeed impossible, so many different ways of looking at things!

May you always please yourself, as you please me and so many here! And one day in the far away future you descendants will sigh when reading all your wonderful work.

You are a true EA!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-10-29 08:14 AM


you talk with a truth many of us can relate to
Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-10-29 08:18 AM


Morning sweet Linda...
and don't most of us do the same thing?
Although I don't think mine are good enough to compile an entire book..
we do have our dreams...
And we have to please ourselves in order to write well.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2004-10-29 08:43 AM


Hi Linda .... how I know this feeling. Everytime I write something, it's a struggle.

I think your poems have already filled a shelf!!!!

huggles and smiles dear sis,  Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2004-10-29 08:54 AM


your pen is a camera
the rhyme is your film
take a million photos
make a sky in your mind
and hang them all there

a poem is a thousand pictures
and a picture is a thousand words

you do well...just let it run

enjoyed this much

Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2004-10-29 01:39 PM


you should always write to please first yourself... and to show the world what it is you see and how it makes you

don't ever stop the words....

((hugs)) and someday the book will line your shelf..

Toerag
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9 posted 2004-10-29 01:55 PM


good grief gal...is this a leading title....hope you're doing well gal
scorpio
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10 posted 2004-10-29 03:41 PM


Let the dream push you to continue to writing Linda.

believe in what your heart feels...

SmartChick
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11 posted 2004-10-29 08:27 PM


Linda, I always enjoy reading your poems.
marcel
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az, usa
12 posted 2004-10-30 02:40 AM


beautiful write! though I must admit my scorpion nature was drawn by the title......
Earth Angel
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13 posted 2004-10-30 09:16 AM


Lee ~

A lovely reply from a lovely Lee!

Have a happy day!

Linda
Black Cat

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2004-10-30 09:18 AM


Mr. T. ~

~ and with good reason you do!

Happy halloweeny hugs & candy kisses,
EA
Candy

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2004-10-30 09:21 AM


Margherita ~

You say the sweetest things, Dear One. I bet you have a beautiful pair of luminescent wings gracing your back.

Love & Angel Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2004-10-30 09:22 AM


Goddess of All Inked Ones ~

Dare to dream ~ and do it!

Love 'n Light,
EA

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2004-10-30 09:25 AM


Enchanting One ~

Hey girl, whatchoo talkin' about?!? I'd buy a book of yours in a snap! Get on it!!! My money is just awaitin' to line your poetic pockets!

With love & respect ~ and affection,
Linda

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-10-30 09:33 AM


Marti ~

You're a fresh breath of New Hampshire air! lol Actually I have several books of my poetry from over the years, bound into a series of books for each member of my family ~ and they do line a shelf! lol

Of course, it is a never-ending project because I keep on writing!

It may be a struggle for you to write each poem, but your effort is very worth it to  your avid readers!!!

You know how I adore your poetic offerings! I keep a look out for posts, dear poetessa ~ and friend!

Loveya!
Linda

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2004-10-30 09:38 AM


Dark One ~

Your reply was picture perfect ~ and much appreciated. Poetically philosophical! Thank you for the reply full of thought!


EA


Earth Angel
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20 posted 2004-10-30 09:40 AM


El Capitan ~

Thank you for the encouraging words. I appreciate your warm response.

Warm hugs and a big smile,
EA

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2004-10-30 09:45 AM


Toe ~

Is that you?!? Is that truly you?!? Gosh, you have no idea how pleased I am that you are staying in the land of the living! As you know, I wazza "hopin' and wishin' and prayin'"!!!

Loving healing hugs,
EA
P.S. I thought the title might intrigue a few readers!
Pro Flirt

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2004-10-30 09:49 AM


scorpio ~

Yeppers! Dare to dream and do it! I'm a big believer in manifesting what you want! And I have found that dreams do come true ~ but in divine time!

Good to hear from you this fine Fall morning ~ even though it is a gray, damp and cold day here north of the 49th parallel! lol


Leo

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2004-10-30 09:50 AM


Hi, Sue!

~ and it pleases me very much that you do enjoy reading my poetry! Hope all is well with you, Sweet One!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2004-10-30 09:54 AM


marcel ~

I must admit that I am a bit of a naughty angel and thought that my intriguing title might get my poem some attention! lol

It pays to advertize!
Hanky Fight

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25 posted 2004-11-03 03:32 PM


My books may never fill a shelf... but boxes of my scribbles surely can stuff a closet! LOL

I enjoyed this, dear lady! *S*

Mark Bohannan
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26 posted 2004-11-04 02:16 AM


I would have to say that I too would love to write the perfect poem, but I do write for me even if it is about someone or something else.  The last verse says it all and I have to admit ... Your title does draw some attention that says "READ ME" lol  Nice choice and equally nice read.
Earth Angel
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27 posted 2004-11-04 09:57 AM


suthern ~

Point the way to your closet!!! I'm on my way! ~ for it be lined with poetic treasures!

Have a happy day!
Linda


Earth Angel
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28 posted 2004-11-04 10:01 AM


Mark ~

You have already written the perfect poem! ~
in fact, you have written several of them!

Continue to please yourself! ~ and others!


Linda

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