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A Closet Held
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A Closet Held |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A closet Held A closet holds the Ides of Parch A wary past still on the march Dated papers years of ream The essence of a life times dream Paper soldiers hold the fort Drilled and trained this life of wrought Sorted like a catalogue Buried deep within its bog The will was left a key of sort To open up this fort of wrought But shines no light to bright the way And much was left in darkest gray The shadows danced a dance Macabre That brought a sigh a cry of sob And sorrow played a tune of awe Gone this friend forevermore I sit in sorrows empathy With hollows note of sympathy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I'm going to open my closet doors, and let my many binders and reams of paper dance a jig...    |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Again a very touching write, dear Seymour! When we pile up everything to go through it later oh there are emotions waiting! I can relate. You are an infinite source of wise ponderings. I hope our friends who are gone, are not really gone, not for evermore I mean. There is a possibility to be in touch, I believe. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Revisiting the past can be bitter sweet. A poignant and touching write, Sir Sonneteer. You indeed are a fine poet man. Wrapping you up in a warm embrace, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And yet another very awesome write this morn Sy! Have a wonderful weekend! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine If you do be prepared. LOL Margherita I fear only Angels know the way. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
why Sy, we've kinda joined minds this morning with somewhat similar wavelengths Terrific, as are all your write, this was a fine read and write...Bless you and yours and Happy Friday |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel The past is like a rubber band Let go and it snaps your hand. Good morning my Angel. Nancy, So glad your are up for tea. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Friday and I was just looking around for thursday.LOL Whatever have a happy. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I sit in sorrows empathy With hollows note of sympathy Me too... hugs M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Perhaps we sorrow too long. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A closet holds the Ides of Parch A wary past still on the march Dated papers years of ream The essence of a life times dream Paper soldiers hold the fort Drilled and trained this life of wrought Sorted like a catalogue Buried deep within its bog ================================ Sy, Sy your are the master of metaphor and sultan of symbols in this clever cadenced confess.  Now we all know ya got no skeletons in your closet.... dragons maybe...but no old bones. LOL *ww*  Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, The old bones are sill walking around. LOL Winkiewinkie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sy...a thought-provoking write this morning |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Good write Sy bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I really enjoyed this, Sy. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Glad you liked. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bslicker, Thank you so much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you for the read. |
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