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ecrivan
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0 posted 2004-10-29 12:57 PM





We all have an obsession or two
some may appear wacky, out of tune
in between party binges or...
hasty summertime theatre fringes

there's an obsession for something
to be somewhere on a certain day
to have something on a certain day
to have a day of something certain

until life stages are completed
after final wage cuts drop defeated
when the audience leaves content or aghast
a wonder how long final acts can last
when competition works so fast
until one completes his last stage
defeated for the final curtain drop
content if performance succeeded
aghast if it flopped...

an obsession for something certain
come a certain day of final curtains
and be somewhere content or aghast
about the final curtain call success
overly concerned at an actor's redress...
address issues that concern that stage
as a recepient of something certain
before the final whistle call
before that final curtain falls.






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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
1 posted 2004-10-29 02:03 AM


Hi Ecrivan,
   I really like this one.
I have an obession of cleaning house 3 times a day.
   :-)

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-10-30 03:53 PM


I would have thought that so many  would be obsessed with whom to vote for...and the daily routine too


froggy
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3 posted 2004-10-30 07:52 PM


You would think there were a lot of people
who have an Obsession of some sort.
I already know who I'm voting for.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

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