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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-10-28 10:27 PM


my dome
of riddled breed.

trussed to the wait
brilliance is galled.

drum sounds
peeling off
virtual worlds
vertically crowded
hiding timid horizon.

pleasure me
new visibility  
i adore
inactive smiles.  

numerous
faithful wraths
swooned
running
hiding
dying…

deep
clean breaths
of new
faithful
wraths


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2004-10-29 05:51 AM


Love the imagery behind this.

it's always a pleasure to read you Padonov

Maree

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-10-29 11:13 AM


pleasure me
new visibility  
i adore
inactive smiles.


very cool lines
  

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-10-29 07:58 PM


much rises from the silences
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-12-03 01:38 AM


It's an ego thing...sometimes when I'm reading a poem, I'll say "I could do it this way"...and occasionally I'll sneak in a "better" out of sheer haughtiness....I have never said either with one of yours!

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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
6 posted 2004-12-03 07:08 AM


thank you all
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