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Open Poetry #34

I just want

DarkDreamer
Junior Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 19
nowhere,special

0 posted 2004-10-28 09:56 PM

I just want

I just want to fall into your arms
And for everything to be okay.
Nothing is simple
But somehow, when I’m with you,
It all makes sense.

I just want you to be here for me.
I want to just let you hold me
And for this world, this life, this stupid situation
To all just go away.

I just want you to wipe away my tears
And hold my pain away from me.
I just want my fears to melt away.
I just want for my life to make sense.

But I just want to be with you.

Be honest, does this suck?

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2004-10-28 10:02 PM

Hi Kristen

I didn't think this sucked at all! I felt so much raw emotion through your words of love and longing.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2004-10-28 11:46 PM

I just want:

to fall into your arms
for everything to be okay.

Nothing is simple Yet somehow,
when I’m with you,
It all makes sense.

you to be here for me.
just let you hold me
for this stupidity
To all just go away.

you to wipe away my tears
hold my pain.

my fears to melt away.
my life to make sense.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-10-29 12:28 PM

Enjoyed...James

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