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In Tears of Tomorrow
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In Tears of Tomorrow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Tears of Tomorrow I brush them aside you know, those droplets of loneliness that fill the eyes with the losses holding them in weakens the resolve reality catching them as they fall being sad is okay for now, erasing the negative opens one up to more of the same storing is a reminder preventing the reoccurrence so I start the day wearing red its strength of brightness rewarding me as I take time to measure the morning knowing tomorrow is closer than I think... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, this is so sad. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
being sad is okay for now, ~*~ Yes...for a little while.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Don't be sad for too long M. Heart Hugs for this bittersweet write. ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just sorting through my life and throwing away "things"... thank you hugs M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
so I start the day wearing red its strength of brightness rewarding me as I take time to measure the morning nicely done ma'am.. these lines especially held me.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"being sad is okay for now" thank you  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Gee-wizz! This is just too sad! But, a beautiful poem. Enjoyed to the max! JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"I brush them aside you know, those droplets of loneliness that fill the eyes with the losses" yeah, i've been there too. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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