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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-28 08:09 AM

the sayer told me about stone
and how you would be a pillar
with your back to my window

I believed her early
she knew of the winds of 72
and the black dog with gold eyes

you spoke of the dragon once
how it died in the cove of lonely
but it was just a tattoo

as was the ring on your mind
and your high heels too
when we went to the johnboat

and listened to the cypress hounds
make splinters in the bayou
the man at the gallery says

I shouldn't touch the statyou
that way in public or at all
so I nod and grin my way to mahya's

for another hand rolled habana
and her dark skin bosom smile
when she calls me mens van steen

and brings her fire to my habit
______________

Dark....scribble note...mayha's is a little joint in St Thomas, good rum and hand rolled habanas...she (mahya) is very dark (like the cigars), very dutch, with emerald green eyes...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-10-28 08:22 AM

This is touching a very
lovely place...it is beautiful
even if you can't touch
the statyou.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-10-28 08:23 AM

Dark
Interesting write enjoyed the read.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

3 posted 2004-10-28 08:30 AM

wow...is this rich in scent and texture...

so much enjoyed....

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-10-28 08:30 AM

I can so relate...

Morning handsome
wishing you a great day
sending you tons of assention smiles
to walk with you in this day of Thursday

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-10-28 09:38 AM

Your scribble notes helped me to better appreciate and understand your intriguing poem. To read of such beautifully described transgressions, brings smiles...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-10-28 09:42 AM

cool write

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-10-28 09:50 AM

Very nice.

I enjoyed a place called "The Greenhouse" in St. Thomas (I believe it was spelled different).

I spent most my time there serving officers wine and cheese...

oh what a life.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-10-28 10:15 AM

Ah Dark - Mayha's sounds exotic and the ambiance of this poem intoxicating - I love places that give that feel - Like Ruby Red's in New Orleans - an atmosphere I shall never forget -

Love this - Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-10-28 12:48 PM

DS

I think I'd like to go there....on some sea to some other eternity.