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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2004-10-27 10:33 PM

peeking through
        fractured prisms of reality

mere reflections
       of distilled thoughts

       crystallized
from truths
         filtered
through murky turbidity

sipped
        from deeply dredged wells
that held only remnants
      of human misery wallowing
        in cups yet to be emptied

bitter taste of a hideous uncoveted darkness,
      tainted by streaming sunlight’s bold glare

and you...standing there smugly

sunglasses in hand,
      rejecting my struggling brilliance,

dimming me into burnt ashes

burned by a heart that spits fire on love’s hearth
                  leaving behind
chilled frost bitten hands

seeking to hold buds of life

dormant, I waited

     for more fertile soils

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2004-10-27 10:48 PM

I don't see you dimmed for long...Or dimmed very much.

Nice write!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2004-10-27 10:50 PM

hey, handsome genius

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2004-10-28 04:54 PM

smiling here...and waiting to watch you bloom

Small seed lays dormant
Underneath thick winter snow
Hope springs eternal

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-10-29 10:24 AM

and when the buds bloom...beauty begins..

loved this one Kacy

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-10-29 10:37 AM

Oh wow Kacy...this is wonderful!
I so much enjoy this style with you.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-10-29 10:40 AM

waiting sometime, can be the most enlightening

Tremendous visuals here!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-10-29 10:42 AM

Midnitesun
You know under the ice there is a very rich soil.

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

8 posted 2004-10-29 11:14 AM

Such a strong assemblage of images, Kacy, any one of them would do in my solar plexus. It is always good to read your thoughts. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2004-10-29 11:18 AM

I relate well

good write

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

10 posted 2004-10-29 11:42 AM

Sounds like one is moving on Midnite. Nice descriptions with a nice nonchalant feeling - becoming conscious and secure of what really is. Nice pen here.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2004-10-29 01:09 PM

nicely written ma'am..

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