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Susan
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0 posted 2004-10-27 09:17 PM



Darkness comes
In the hushed silence of night
Veiled in his cloak of shadows
Swirling about as mists
Of dew drop passion shimmering
Hiding his face
But not his words
Which brush as if fingers
Tracing the language of sin
Across exposed flesh
Writing shiver trails
Over hardened ends
And through soft valleys
Leaving remains of damp upon lips
Mouthing the naughty
But tasting of the divine
Merging into rivers
Seeping through vestiges
Of wine blend moments
Of carnal caramel
And the dark Chocolate
Of consummation

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-10-27 09:57 PM


Well my dear, if this is in any way a response to Wranx' challenge, I know certainly whose mask you hide behind...

and you did a magnificent job!

And that is a wonderful photo!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-10-27 11:33 PM


oooh lala, Susan, this is a tasty tribute write to the Dark's fine pen

*cool photo, lady*


Aenimal
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3 posted 2004-10-28 12:06 PM


excellent write
exhale
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4 posted 2004-10-28 12:27 PM


this was so amazing,it just left me speachless.
thank you for writting this work of art.

Susan
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5 posted 2004-10-28 12:33 PM


Ah, thank you - it is Strange - wearing this cloak of Darkness - yet so very delightful

Hugs all -

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-10-28 01:33 AM


Enjoyed...James
babygirlwlove
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7 posted 2004-10-28 07:15 AM


oh yeah...gotta love that hot, Dark chocolate before bed...lol

this is lovely...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2004-10-28 07:44 AM


vous ĂȘtes savoring sensual ms susan
btw..I got a five gallon bucket of melted M&Ms..wanna party?  enjoyed this much and the photo,mmmmm got a sister?

LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-10-28 08:45 AM


what a beautiful photograph of you...and the likeness shines through your words...light, refreshing, a lady poetess with much to give...
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-10-28 08:59 AM


Susan
Now that's my kind of writing. Well done.

Enchantress
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11 posted 2004-10-28 09:07 AM


Oooh wonderful write Susan!
And, love the new pic!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2004-10-28 09:14 AM


Mona Lisa lives on! Love your new photo!

After reading your poem, I find myself craving sweets ~ both literally and figuratively! Flirty 2

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-10-28 09:17 AM


Dark is nice sometimes

I like the new picture of you

Susan
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14 posted 2004-10-28 10:12 AM


Most appreciated - but this morning it seems to be the old me up there? Hmmmmm-

This was a fun write and muse inspired - thank you for your kind replies and the gift of friendship -

Hugs all -  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2004-10-28 10:33 AM


I love chocolate...and other candy as well..

  yet another fine writing.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
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16 posted 2004-10-28 02:40 PM


Thank you Susan - Chocolate passion must run with the name

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Margherita
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17 posted 2004-10-30 10:20 AM


Wow! Glad I came across this juicy write ...

SPECIAL!

You are beautiful ... on all levels!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Susan
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18 posted 2004-10-30 11:16 AM


Margherita - you are beyond sweet - thank you so much dear -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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