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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-10-27 07:34 PM

you strut that voice
soul sounds slipping
cross dancing drawl
wrappin' 'round
jazz sounds
makin' bones tumble
to toe tappin' rhythm
you're sin in a song
honey glazed
over the Sting
of you

s.a.t.

Listening to one of my favorite artists - Sting, and thought I'd write a little something

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

1 posted 2004-10-27 08:59 PM

got my toes tappin'

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-10-27 09:25 PM

thnx babygirL - music moves the soul -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2004-10-28 01:33 AM

"I have a wager" the brave child spoke,
The fisherman laughed, though disturbed at the joke,
"You will drink what I drink but you must equal me,
And if the drink leaves me standing,
A soul shall go free."

Hm, thanks Susan...it's been awhile
since I thought about these words....

K

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2004-10-28 04:52 AM

My toe is tapping, too. This one pulled me into it. I like

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-10-28 06:53 AM

cross dancing drawl
wrappin' 'round
jazz sounds
makin' bones tumble
to toe tappin' rhythm
you're sin in a song
honey glazed
over the Sting
of you

Wow...what a write! Just sitting here shaking my head in awe...speechless

What terrific writers in this page...
Thank you for sharing

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2004-10-28 07:53 AM

hey does he wrestle in the WWE? (cool stuff babe)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-10-28 09:36 AM

good stuff!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-10-28 09:42 AM

My daughter recently attended a Sting concert in Toronto. She would really appreciate your poem! I'll show it to her.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-10-28 10:09 AM

Thank you all most kindly for the smile of your replies this morning -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

10 posted 2004-10-28 02:49 PM

you're sin in a song
honey glazed

~*~

Excellent!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2004-10-28 02:54 PM

Thank you Decaflame - listening to Sting makes me think things unbecoming of a lady

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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