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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-10-27 03:02 PM



The world shifts beneath
our caress...

As if reality has gathered to
the fingers.

And waits only for the
moment of our
touch.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-10-27 03:07 PM



Oh...
THAT
was the earthquake
I felt...


Alicia
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2 posted 2004-10-27 03:51 PM


oh, fabulous!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-27 04:40 PM


...Exquisite!....

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-10-27 07:31 PM


Mmmm, mmmm, mmmm - yes siree -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2004-10-27 11:08 PM


dang, you done didit again
GG
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2004-10-28 04:54 AM


Wow,
you certainly accomplished an array of feelings with these words. Amazing.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

LeeJ
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7 posted 2004-10-28 06:52 AM


Tremendous!
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-10-28 09:38 AM


short and powerful...always admired that about you
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2004-10-28 09:40 AM


Your poem gives a whole new meaning ~ and feel! ~ to the saying, "Reach out and touch somebody."
Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2004-10-28 05:58 PM


The world shifts beneath
our caress...

As if reality has gathered to
the fingers.

And waits only for the
moment of our
touch.



Meteorites of love
flash through space
crashing against
our bodies
casting our souls
into each other
changing forever
our horizons


Another sparkling gem!
I love you.
Margherita


DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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11 posted 2004-10-28 06:06 PM


Eric

Hope you dont mind

Dave

The world shifts beneath
our caress...

Sounds penetrate gently
Like a life
In a room
To one side
To take
As if reality has gathered to
the fingers.

And waits only for the
moment of our
touch.


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