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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She tangoed Slowly, Twisting sex Chilly peppers Heat my spine My hand ran down She lifts it up We were dancing Love The lights were low The tango Slow I held my breath Another move We broke apart Each beat Of time Pumped my heart We closed and Dipped Around and back My eyes were lit Like glowing coals We brushed our Bodies Rubbing fire A glowing moment of Desire |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dark???????? well, he's going to get a grin out of this...way cool sir! He'll love it! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You do the dance of love so well! Wonderful...are you writing another poet for the challange? I wrote one tango poem along time ago, but I was just learning how. You are an expert.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I believe I see a hint of dark? Enjoyed your mask Sey. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Id know that chili pepper anywhere-- ITS RED HOT RANDY!!!!! WOOOO HOOOO.  You dance divine Sy-guy.    |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
WOW WOW *sizzle* who? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...it's a toss up between Dark, and Serenity... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I don't care who it is....if she could get you to write like this....keep her!! Here you amaze me, Sy  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well I would hope it was ME! *battin' eyelashes* When did you teach Randy how to type? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Methinks it's either Serenity or Dark. But I'm leaning toward Serenity! Excellent Sy guy. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Forget about the battin' eyelashes, battin down the hatches, Glad you enjoyed and forgive the heat of the moment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yowsers!!!! *S* Excellent write, my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Glad you liked it sweet. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Seymour, you caught fire! I love you very much in this mask! Great. Love, Margherita  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Sy! You are such a great poet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Couldn't ask for more. thanks sweety SmartChick Thank you for the WOW. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is not my Sy no way! This is that rascal Dark Stranger me thinks, or perhaps even Icebox? I am guessing but I bet that moth is right, someone let Randy out on too much raspberry tea again |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I'm afraid you're right about Randy. LOL passing, Thank you dear. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just came by to see if you would come out to play? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, With you any time. |
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