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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-02-04 02:34 PM



synthetic toxic fed symphonies
pound in my head
a death march

though –

it may be more like . . .

the “Talking Heads”
jammin’
“take me to the river,
drop me in the water”

better than—

“psycho killer”

a song that mayhaps
could sing the sad bad truth
if my
glue fed
fresh carpet laid
Hades in the head -- ache
doesn’t flee

from

those little round men
in white jackets
masquerading as
acetaminophen
with codeine chasers

they’re coming to take me away
ah ha he he ho ho

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04
Posts 501
aloft
1 posted 2005-02-04 04:44 PM


I think you need to get out of the house more often!

HeeHee

Enjoyed this!
(through my own bloomin' headache!)


glider

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-02-04 05:28 PM


I know the feeling...

~soft hugs~
M

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-02-04 06:16 PM


They've remodeled at work - to the chemically sensative - oy!  Especially since the new carpet has been laid - ah well, it's the weekend - yipee!  Clean air -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

4 posted 2005-02-04 11:02 PM


I love this Susan. This just made me smile big time. Now I can't get the old silly songs out of my head. You know the ones...

They are coming to take me away ha ha,
they are coming to take me away hee hee...

Or how about...

Star trek'n across the universe,
boldly going forward...under Captain Kirk.

ROFLMAO! Yup ypu just sunk into my brain some of those old silly songs...now I am going to have the pain on the brain. (Shrug!) Oh well it will pass. Huge smile my friend!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-02-05 11:37 AM


Thanks Kevin - now you've got me laughing and old star trek images in my head - btw -I love that old nutty song - didn't know how many would remember it - hehe

thanks for you fun reply - hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2005-02-07 11:26 PM


bugging out huh?
we really gotta break these chains ya know?

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2005-02-07 11:30 PM


Even with a headache, you show great humor and imagination!  Good one, Susan.   ....jo
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
8 posted 2005-02-08 02:26 AM


enjoyed this
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