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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-10-27 08:59 AM


Morning rolled in lazily
while dawn stretching her arms wide
shook off half sleep of slumber
spreading smiles o're Autumn hues.

Gold rays illuminated
the slight kiss of dew on leaves
richly bronzing the season
in bright colors of splendor.

The earth mother awakened
with a sigh song sent blowing
breezes of slight rippling
over yon shimmering lake.

Nature sang in harmony
under heavenly blue skies
I, with coffee cup in hand
finding my internal rhyme
prepared to greet the new day.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-10-27 09:01 AM


Gentle,
A lovely way to greet the morning.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-10-27 09:04 AM


The earth mother awakened
with a sigh song sent blowing
breezes of slight rippling
over yon shimmering lake.

Nature sang in harmony
under heavenly blue skies
I, with coffee cup in hand
finding my internal rhyme
prepared to greet the new day.


From your own words.....
The greatest beauty on earth, is
a poet describing this time of year...and yours are no exception....wonderfully magical, making me adore this time of year

Thank you for writing and sharing.


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-27 09:08 AM


Ah Donna...such a lovely autumnal morning read.
This is so peaceful and so very beautiful.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-10-27 10:30 AM


Donna, I could read this lovely poem over and over... so I have now saved it so I can!!!


May all your mornings be as glorious!
Loves 'n hugs,
Linda
Fall Colors

choshi
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New York
5 posted 2004-10-27 10:31 AM


WHat beautiful impressions you have evoked...this autumn morning...Thank you ~P
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2004-10-27 09:40 PM


A better fall dawn
I could not trip over...
lovely in all aspects, m'friend.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2004-10-29 07:27 AM


Thanks everyone, your comments are much appreciated.  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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In Your Poetic Mind
8 posted 2004-10-30 01:46 AM


hugssss you -- beauty surrounds you

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

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