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across the spine (Wranx' Masquerade Challenge)
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across the spine (Wranx' Masquerade Challenge) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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listen.... do you hear in the stretch of hallowed ground? petals spread across the spine of lovers arching sound turning churning in sprig of mirth Goddess trembles birth of (curse) rush - rush he is here! ADONIS listen.... do you hear? :NOTE: my apologies to this poet at my feeble attempt. I could never do justice to your style. and I am haunted |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Now Maree, this one definately has me stumped for now...so I will be back to re-read it and see what I come up with.... maybe it's just to early for my brain to catch on to it....jeezzzzz The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This challenge of Wranx' has been like a booster shot of inspiration... I'll be back...you did good! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ser whould be pleased... well done ma'am.. well done.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well... I was thinking Karen or Gemma... Either way...very impressive!!!  I likie."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a morning eye opener. I see Ms Nawlins here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, Tastes like serenity to me. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG I have to come back to this one . . . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH! I do believe I see our Serenity here. Challenge well met! ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Your witch's hat may be the tiniest bit askew...but not enough, not to recognize her. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful work bella, you've captured ze goddess well |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
c'mere you... If this is me, then would that I could see myself through your eyes. absolutely beautiful are you  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See? You did good! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awww Maree see? you done good told ya . . . plbbbt! *smile* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed this - well done.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
see Maree? You done good . . . *smile* told ya . . . *grin* this made it K right here: Goddess trembles birth of (curse) beautiful! (OMG it posted double! sorry . . .) |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you did sooo wonderful! a true beauty.... both this, and the poetess you masked |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thanks all so much... and Karen, it wasn't easy but I loved and enjoyed trying  and I am haunted |
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