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ice
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0 posted 2004-10-26 09:12 PM



Death is no enigma, not puzzling
Witnessed
Everyday...common.

But life!, new life!
Is a riddle, unsolvable...

That a woman in labor
Breaches at the confluence
Of leg branches, an amniotic
Sea that floats a ripe fruit,
From a lovely flower blossom

Nine months
After being dusted with pollen;

Is truly a miracle,

A thing that makes solving
The riddle improbable.


Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-10-26 09:14 PM


Yes new life is a miracle Ford.
Much enjoyed this piece.
Well done!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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2 posted 2004-10-26 09:15 PM


LOL, yes, it IS a miracle, every dang time.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-10-26 09:19 PM


That a woman in labor
Breaches at the confluence
Of leg branches, an amniotic
Sea that floats a ripe fruit,
From a lovely flower blossom

~*~

Having been there...in several ways...
never takes away the joy of the new!

But the curious kitten that I am is begging
to know, are you kin to this miracle?

And if so...your name, Sir...

Dad?  Uncle?  Grandpa???

Please feed me my cream in your answer!

ice
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4 posted 2004-10-26 09:44 PM


Nancy
Glad you enjoyed this piece..
Thanks again for helping me..

Kacy
It is a "dang" miracle..."everytime....
Thanks for your reply...

Karilea
Yes, I am 'kin' to the miracle...4 times
And I am a dad, an uncle and a grandpa..
Have seen two of my children born....The first one was born when dads paced the waiting room with a pocket of cigars, with the second and third I was a birth witness, and the fourth was a c-section, the hospital kept me out of the room....
Hope that gives you a milk mustache.....lol

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

froggy
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5 posted 2004-10-27 01:50 AM


Hey Ford,
  Beautiful piece you compose here.
I like this very much,made me think about
both times I went through it.
Love it my friend.

:-)  

Within this heart you'll find love

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6 posted 2004-10-27 02:02 AM


smiling here
Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-10-27 02:13 AM


But life!, new life!
Is a riddle, unsolvable...

That a woman in labor
Breaches at the confluence
Of leg branches, an amniotic
Sea that floats a ripe fruit,
From a lovely flower blossom

Nine months
After being dusted with pollen;

Is truly a miracle,


truly it is......
and this is truly magnificent.

it's a

Maree

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-10-27 07:08 AM


I've always thought that having children was not only a women's greatest accomplisment and experience, but a great purpose as well.  

Ford, this was amazing...thank you

Sunshine
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9 posted 2004-10-27 07:44 AM


Purrrrrr....it most certainly did!  I'm sure glad I didn't ask if it meant you were a great-grandpa...

It is most certainly a most wonderful moment!

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