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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-10-26 07:54 PM



Sometimes, Always

There is always a clear night sky,
Somewhere

There is always a pale moon glowing,
Some nights




There is not always a row of milo left behind for birds,
Nor a harvest full of sound…

But still a fire burns
Within most

To discover, and rediscover,

Life.

~*~

ok, blame GS...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-10-26 07:56 PM


oh...oh...I LOVE IT when I get the blame for good things!!  
Told ya I would beg her to come back...  

ah....
she is home.....right where she belongs...

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2 posted 2004-10-26 08:08 PM


Yes, that muse came home. Of course, I don't think she ever really left, just took a tiny break.
Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-10-26 09:12 PM


I don't think your muse was ever very far away Karilea...
This is awesome!
Wonderful piece of work and perfect pic.

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

kayjay
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4 posted 2004-10-26 09:32 PM


My goodness!  Such photography and verse.  I think my "take away" on this is to remember how very small human affairs may be.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2004-10-27 01:55 AM


so glad that these moments i spend here hold so much.....

and GS is a lovely poetess that knows just how much you bring to us


passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-10-27 05:25 AM


You should make this into a poster...

this is going in my library...you know...it's beautiful

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-10-27 05:28 AM


Beautiful Karilea.... and thank you GS

Maree.

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

ice
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8 posted 2004-10-27 07:03 AM


"There is not always a row of milo left behind for birds,
Nor a harvest full of sound…"

That says it all....excellent
--------ice
  ><>


LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-10-27 07:16 AM


your photographs are beautiful and they always spark such dear thoughts from your soul, to paper, to us...thank you dear lady and please thank you muse for me as well, as I'm happy she's home.  Simply lovely!
babygirlwlove
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10 posted 2004-10-27 07:31 AM


feeling your message...lovely

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Martie
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11 posted 2004-10-27 11:58 AM


Wonderful and uplifting, sweet sissy!     
Ericc
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12 posted 2004-10-27 02:52 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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