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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2004-10-26 07:01 PM

I still smell you

Weighed upon me
in a hungered gravity
leaving me in want of words

and of you

Try as I might
I cannot pull you
from the gloss and into arms

your pictures are anchors
sinking me into the depths
of perfect eyes that reflect

the sea that lies between us

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2004-10-26 07:07 PM

I KNOW who this is, but will stay quiet for a while. A perfect write of this poet's style and words.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-10-26 07:08 PM

I'm not sure Raph, honestly...but I believe I might see a bit of our Snow in this? Well done and challenge met!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-10-26 07:08 PM

Now I am guessing the ever popular Dark Angel there, but if I am wrong I enjoyed whomever it is

GG
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Lost in thought

4 posted 2004-10-26 07:26 PM

I definitely see Snow in this...
whoever it is, you've certainly complimented them.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

5 posted 2004-10-26 07:27 PM

OK, so isn't it who I think, Raphie? she is smart, pretty, and lives across the English channel.
LOL.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2004-10-26 07:28 PM

is it gem ?

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-26-2004 08:08 PM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-10-26 07:39 PM

It is a poet of grace, and style...

and I will stay quiet.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

8 posted 2004-10-26 09:18 PM

You got it!

As for which one of you that's addressed to, I ain't sayin..yet

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2004-10-26 09:46 PM

Dude? I see Maree all over this. It reads like her "lighthouse series"

Thanks for playing!

GG
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Lost in thought

10 posted 2004-10-26 09:48 PM

Oh come on... that just isn't fair!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

11 posted 2004-10-26 10:03 PM

actually two of you are right, although each guess has garnered two responses each..shrugs

No pouting Alyssa lol

Midnitesun

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Gaia

12 posted 2004-10-26 10:19 PM

Raphie's asking for a spanking

babygirlwlove
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New York City

13 posted 2004-10-26 10:23 PM

again...I haven't been on this board long enough to distinguish individual styles...but this is ome sweet poetry, A~

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Midnitesun

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Gaia

14 posted 2004-10-26 10:36 PM

AHA! Yes, I was off the mark. 'Tis the one across the other seas, the one that strikes like lightning...Dark Angel.
Well???

GG
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Lost in thought

15 posted 2004-10-26 11:03 PM

Don't even!

*mumbles* thinkyoucanstopmefrompouting.illpoutgoodandwellwheneveriwantto,yeahyouhearthat,illpoutifiwanna.

Now, tell!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

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the ass-end of space

16 posted 2004-10-26 11:10 PM

Oi! Tis indeed the lass from down under. you can stop pouting now Alyssa lol, and Kacy, spankin's can be fun grins

Thanks for the read/replies and thanks ed for adding a spark to the boards

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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17 posted 2004-10-26 11:25 PM

hey Bells.....thanks for the honour m'friend, a second time around WOW!

love ya.

and like Ed said, like my lighthouse series.

Mxx

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Martie

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California

18 posted 2004-10-26 11:41 PM

Really well done, Raph!

muted

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

19 posted 2004-10-27 01:42 AM

*APPLAUSE*

nice repost Raphy, and this time without the tantrum

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

20 posted 2004-10-27 09:05 AM

Well...guess I didn't make it here quick enough...

geez..

Nice job Raph!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

21 posted 2004-10-27 10:44 AM

Okay, I'll take a stab ('tis the season!) at who it might be ~ el capitan?

Whomever it be, I am most certain they will be flattered by your fine attempt at emulating them!

Sending you a halloween hug,
EA

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

22 posted 2004-10-27 12:17 PM

This is perfect Raph, my guess was Maree right off the bat.

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

23 posted 2004-10-27 04:55 PM

You're all too kind, this one tanked the first time around thus Dawn's smartarse comments. Thanks for the read, Dawn..pbllllllllt

muted

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

24 posted 2004-10-31 08:13 AM

yeah, im bringing back up....a blatant BUMP

..suffer Raphy...

cause this is just so awesome

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