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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-10-26 11:12 AM

Rays through a morning’s eye,
splitting-
sand latent columns of delinquencies.
Another day
brought by a fiendish time. In
another season
follows me in color.
Should awakening knowledge of
your presence
be as mine?
Your face sunken,
hiding - if you will,
And leave me the unexplained
delinquencies of
another day, we cough by.
Another season
till I wish
as I close my eye’s.
Just to see you.
Where reality doe’s not know,
do I?

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-10-26 12:00 PM

whewww know the feeling, this one hit home...
Hey, why hasn't anyone else read this one yet...

Your going right back up to the top, no one should miss this one

Magnificanct write

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-10-26 04:41 PM

Quality

Dave

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2004-10-27 10:43 PM

High quality!

I think this got caught up in the masquerade storm we had here lately...needs a bump

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2004-10-27 11:29 PM

thanx wranx for bringing this back

as always, Wayne, you leave us
with a pondering good write

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-10-28 12:04 PM

mysticpoe/Wayne

You do have a way of writing that says something I can't explain, but in such a way that I feel it anyway. Enjoyed this!

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2004-10-28 10:00 AM

LeeJ, Thanks for starting this one for me. I greatly appreciate your kindness. Thanks so much again.

Dave, Thanks for your extremely up-lifting response. I'm so glad you took the time to stop by. Thanks again.

wranx, your support has meant so much to me. Thank you for the BUMP!!

Midnitesun, your continued support has given me newly found inspirational reasons for using the pen - since you came on board during my last few writes. Thank you for all your MUCH appreciated reads and comments.

Martie, what a beautiful comment!! To be understood in such a very sincere way. Thank you so much for stopping by.

Again, Thanks to you all, VERY MUCHHH!!

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-10-28 10:37 AM

Yes, very nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-10-28 12:09 PM

an awesome write...glad I stopped by

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2004-10-28 05:05 PM

great write...much said even between the lines

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

10 posted 2004-10-29 12:06 PM

Susan, passing shadows and hoot_owl, thank you for stopping and taking the time to read and comment.

Thanks again,

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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