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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-10-26 08:06 AM


Scabbed over pleasure walks

Forces one more drink in her hand

She played poker with petrified footprints

On 10th Street every weekend

She’d never been to those places he took her

Danged time lines of another man!

She’d divorced desire, belief…living in separate pigments

Ones she didn’t yet understand?  It was too soon!

Marriage owned hard labor without negotiation

She was now free but afraid of elevators

He was but a crumb on the horizon

This handsome Englishman…

Showing her sights…the great Lady holding our flame

Lunch in Little Italy, a bungalow in Williamsburg

Her feet left the ground on a moonlight balcony

She’d left his bed at night, pinching herself

Gazing at giant birds circling the PP&L Building

She lay naked there once…in broad daylight

Daring to balance a side she’d not yet known

Hearing the sound of brimming calm, learning about open chairs

Courage came like a slow accumulation of eye lashes

Until lines pirouetted into mountains of Shenandoah

While he tucked an afghan around her toes

Where they’d been many times, slow wood burning stoves!

Following inflated summer, away from the world’s venom

She was young, believed the earth was a miracle of seedlings

Pulling into the parking lot of Bank of America, there he was

Loaning her cornfields, moving her hands away from the dark

Ice started to melt, in the highways of their breath

To a suit of lights, where poachers abandoned back alleys

New songs began to move south

Taking them along to a forest schoolhouse

But…she knew his love for fast cars

Lottery tickets and youth, stylish

When October came

She knew time travel wasn’t possible

He feared the abstract paintings she’d admitted

The ones about age and marriages

She’s have rather had root canal

She’d only known bottom feeders and landfills

It was the best she could do, considering X-rays

Which named her fear, of restless dogs

And so, she laid out a bed of oysters for him

Letting go of his thigh, turning up her collar

Slipping away, quietly….

In another life, perhaps?

He enjoyed gardening and windsurfing

Skiing the alpines…places she couldn’t go

She touched more then a lover

But a magnetic region of the spirit world

She now writes of growing seasons

Still visiting 10th street, beneath the weight of

A sometimes empty streetlight

To tunes of departed lovers

The For Sale sign on his home

Had been taken down

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2004-10-26 08:11 AM


just a man i think not.......you breathed life into this slice of theatre
:applause:

ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2004-10-26 08:15 AM


"And at that particular point in time

They did the best they could!"

I'll say they did...sounds as if there were many good times.....you have brought those good times into cosmopolitan clarity, by stating what they did in words them make them seem close, and local..

enjoyed
--------ice/ford

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-10-26 08:16 AM


LeeJ
Weather it be therapy or reality, it is excellent. Good morning dear.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
4 posted 2004-10-26 09:57 AM


good, good stuff....


**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2004-10-26 12:10 PM


Well done..

and something close to my heart..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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