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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2004-10-25 11:00 PM

A hesitant sun
breaks through rusted leaves, as the
winds whisper winter

*simply for the sake of posting something, anything, and to appease some annoying people pressuring me to write..pbllllllt

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2004-10-25 11:02 PM

beautiful

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-10-25 11:36 PM

what a wonder of images....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2004-10-25 11:40 PM

leaves

Tossed across my path
yellows, reds, kaleidoscoping
Autumn wind's pleasure

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-25 11:40 PM

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2004-10-26 03:52 AM

Good, good, very good... now, more. Please?

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2004-10-26 04:07 AM

not enough to satisfy me, more more more! I will feed off of you! muahahaha!

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

7 posted 2004-10-26 04:10 AM

this "simply for the sake" is pretty good

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2004-10-26 04:17 AM

why are autumn leaves the color of bruises?

sigh

I wish I knew

this aches my heart

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

9 posted 2004-10-26 04:20 AM

Beautiful imagery Aenimal

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

10 posted 2004-10-26 06:29 AM

love your style, A~

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2004-10-26 06:35 AM

Yummy...

but it was like having but just a taste of something you want real bad...

more please?

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (10-26-2004 07:37 AM).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2004-10-26 07:36 AM

Simply beautiful Bello

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2004-10-26 07:45 AM

Iced breath forces leaves
to lie still beneath the sky,
a final dance of Autumn.

This makes me sooooo happy to see this, Raph.
(see? I am horrid at this, you have a gift, please start using it again,

OH . . . you have.)

*smile*

they are whispering . . .

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2004-10-26 08:42 AM

We love it when you listen...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2004-10-26 08:47 AM

What beautiful whispers....
it is SO good to read you again.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

16 posted 2004-10-26 08:47 AM

nice to read you again sir.. and the piece. is nicely done..

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

17 posted 2004-10-26 08:48 AM

"Simply for the sake...."

Well, you certainly demonstrate the beauty of simplicity here....~P

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

18 posted 2004-10-26 09:05 AM

hehehehhe,

well, I'm certainly happy to hear they've errr, convinced you to do so

adding....wonderfully done!

smiles and hugs

more, more more

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

19 posted 2004-10-26 10:48 AM

yeah,
i would say that annoying you was well worth the effort....

a wonderful display here Raphy

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

20 posted 2004-10-26 11:52 AM

ditto
we fully intend to continue this form of poetic harassment until you give in
and give us what we want

capiche???

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

21 posted 2004-10-26 12:21 PM

You're all too kind, thank you all for stopping by

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

22 posted 2004-10-26 04:39 PM

Bello?

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

23 posted 2004-10-27 01:55 PM

oh, awesome! i love haikus...nice to see some around here. this was very lovely, among the best haikus i've ever read.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

24 posted 2004-10-27 03:48 PM

hesitant, me too,...wish i could have responded in haiku but i'm terribly incapable of doing so.
i did try though.
anyway, pleased to see this, and they are rusted (i like that), aged and in need of a burial.
this season bleeds me. ~a.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

25 posted 2004-10-27 03:51 PM

You should post "anything" more often!

I like it when the animal in you purrs...

EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

26 posted 2004-10-27 04:44 PM

Thanks again everyone, felt good to post something new

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