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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-10-25 08:47 AM



Famished rain
Pelts skin
Hunted down and captured
Disrobing bitter desires
Snarling sounds
Teeth gnashing
Groping to get in
Throwing bitter crumbs
Manipulation for chocking flashbacks
Tightening the noose around my neck
The 8 in razor sharp blade
Sparkling like a silver dog
Ready to go for the throat...

I, like a doe eyed child
Body blackened by mortars
Signatured by throes of death
Slobbering all over under-developed breasts
Wolf of cold, mud wetted nightmares
Sobs emerging from an unknown place
Primeval scalpels of unspeakable acts

Cutting with precision skill
Twigs popping like breaking bones
White ghastly sheets of screams
Snapping anorexic faith

Emptiness making love to authenticity
Downloading bruised corpses, invade the mind
Taking their turns, mutating fantasy…
“Ohhhh Gods” scream silently
Tight closed eyes
Going to a place
Where fear blocks my path
Where women retreat into gutters
Running fear, stabbing my body
Broken, bleeding silence.....

Numbing, stagnant, eradicating foul language
Gagging voices, mental disability, chewing sanity
Like the empty heart of a victim
With both hands tied
Alone
Perplexed
Wandering
Alone, in a drowning mind
Bombers spiraling
Murderous circles
Like black hawks of death
And unsolved crimes
Afterbirth of stolen light
Oozing from ears
Dancing images of assault
With thrusting endurance
but...

I, cradle my mind
Between a clear spring sky focus
and knowing CARE the way I do
Being careful not to defeat myself
And "do" possess the audacity to believe
I deserve it...to the right way and start
While turning out the light of dark
Surprized?
Don't be...
Just, please care for someone enough
To change our judicial system
Putting these preditors away for Good


Written after watching "A Time to Kill"



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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-10-25 09:22 AM


LeeJ
Take an asprin and you will feel better in the morning. LOL Don't watch those pictures.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-10-25 09:36 AM


Lee~

'I, cradle my mind
Between a clear spring sky focus'


... and sometimss that is the only way to clear the mind~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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choshi
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since 2004-01-01
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New York
3 posted 2004-10-25 09:42 AM


Powerful....mesmerizing, I agree with Sy.

~P

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-10-25 08:25 PM


always love your stuff

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