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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-10-25 07:39 AM


The Turning

In turning of the earth from light
I pass into my dreams of night
Through illusions misty door
Into implosions evermore

Lost within an endless vie
I cannot catch the wind of cry
Nor can I steer a true of course
Without the knowledge of its source

And though I maul the power dun
The large and small the all of one
I cannot place the small of me
Upon the omni that I see

And time and space make leap across
The echoes of the changing force
And I am caught the weave of it
An eternity of knit

It seems beyond my cope of scope
But pray it’s not beyond my hope



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Spiros Zafiris
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1 posted 2004-10-25 08:08 AM


..yea Seymour, always a pleasure to read one
of your poems..!

sp


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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-10-25 08:12 AM


Spiros,
The pleasure is all mine.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-10-25 08:35 AM


I'll arm-wrestle you for
whose pleasure it really is, Sy...

because you share so very well
with all of us...

As far as hope goes?
You've a soul full of it...
and it multiplies daily!


MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-10-25 08:39 AM


good morning sir. your always a welcome site


      


scorpio
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5 posted 2004-10-25 08:50 AM


"I cannot place the small of me
Upon the omni that I see"

Sy this line resonates with me so much.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-10-25 08:52 AM


And time and space make leap across
The echoes of the changing force
And I am caught the weave of it
An eternity of knit


Sy, you weave a benefit spell every morning, one of which I plan to invest...thank you dear man....

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-10-25 09:17 AM


LeeJ
Thank you dear and may you have the very best of mornings.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-10-25 09:25 AM


Wonderful wonderful morning write Sy.
Now my day is underway,
since I have had my dose of Sy and my tea.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2004-10-25 09:30 AM


Seymour~

'Lost within an endless vie
I cannot catch the wind of cry
Nor can I steer a true of course
Without the knowledge of its source'


With lines like this
you begin my morning
with poetic kiss~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

choshi
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10 posted 2004-10-25 09:49 AM


Lovely...seems so daunting, yet so full of hope...just what I needed this gray morning.

And time and space make leap across
The echoes of the changing force
And I am caught the weave of it
An eternity of knit


Oh yes!   Thank you

~P



Earth Angel
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11 posted 2004-10-25 10:05 AM


Morning greetings, Dear Poet

Ye be not caught in the net of knit, for ye be a weaver of it!

Love & Angel Light,
EA


suthern
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12 posted 2004-10-28 12:32 PM


And time and space make leap across
The echoes of the changing force
And I am caught the weave of it
An eternity of knit

It seems beyond my cope of scope
But pray it’s not beyond my hope

For me, it's one of dreams' finest aspects... that they leap across time and space... those little skips leave me with hope. *S*

I enjoyed this very much, my friend. *S*

Martie
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13 posted 2004-10-28 12:41 PM


I missed this one, Sy...so glad it came back to the top for me to read.  It's lovely!  
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-10-28 12:42 PM


suthern
Thank you so much my dear.

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-10-28 12:43 PM


Martie
You are a sweetheart.

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