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Huan Yi
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Tale


God is the Sun;
people were burned..and cancerous.
God is the Sea;
people drowned.

God is the Tree;
they collected no wood
and they were cold.

And the priest said:
" God is all,
every where in every being. "
And the people stopped, confused,
afraid of what to do.

And the priest
thought on this...
and said: " Okay,
God is the Cat. "

And the people were happy...

and the cat
purred.
            

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Susan
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Very interesting - sad too - in its own way-

Susan

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*keeping this*

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Interesting
ecrivan
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Goes to show how the Almighty can take different forms according to people's perceptions of what is safe....so this appears to be your theme?

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I like this it makes one or at least me think.

:-)
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very thought provoking.

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LOL. Meow to this one, John.
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who said that? if there is God then He has to the beginning of the love.

But we all in the tale and we all in the tale.
 
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