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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-10-24 09:39 PM


Tale


God is the Sun;
people were burned..and cancerous.
God is the Sea;
people drowned.

God is the Tree;
they collected no wood
and they were cold.

And the priest said:
" God is all,
every where in every being. "
And the people stopped, confused,
afraid of what to do.

And the priest
thought on this...
and said: " Okay,
God is the Cat. "

And the people were happy...

and the cat
purred.
            


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Susan
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1 posted 2004-10-24 09:40 PM


Very interesting - sad too - in its own way-

Susan

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2 posted 2004-10-24 09:40 PM


*keeping this*


Juju
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3 posted 2004-10-24 11:12 PM


Interesting

ecrivan
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4 posted 2004-10-24 11:39 PM


Goes to show how the Almighty can take different forms according to people's perceptions of what is safe....so this appears to be your theme?


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5 posted 2004-10-24 11:45 PM




I like this it makes one or at least me think.

:-)

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6 posted 2004-10-24 11:50 PM


very thought provoking.

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7 posted 2004-10-25 12:29 PM


LOL. Meow to this one, John.
Drauntz
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8 posted 2007-05-14 11:52 PM


who said that? if there is God then He has to the beginning of the love.

But we all in the tale and we all in the tale.

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