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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2004-10-24 04:32 PM



Saturday, October 24, 2004 2:15 P.M.

Weep not for the pain that I feel,
‘Tis but heartache I’d not conceal,
Soon the sun will upspring again,
After my prayers are said, “Amen.”

These colors hurt my bleary eyes,
When has such a blue touched the skies?
It seems mayhap that this is dream,
But I’d ne’er fancy such a theme.

Fallen is our commander and chief,
Unready yet honest is this grief,
Goodbye beloved, dearest, grand dad,
I’ve naught more to say. My heart’s sad.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2004 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-10-24 05:21 PM


Great big hugs and tears of compassion from my heart to yours -   Your love for this man is most evident in your words for him - may you be wrapped in comfort and memories of times shared-

Love -Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-10-24 05:48 PM


I am so sorry for your loss Kevin.
May your grandfather rest in peace now.
Hold the memories close to you of happy times with him.
Heart hugs to you my friend.

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-10-24 06:27 PM



froggy
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4 posted 2004-10-24 11:20 PM


My Dearest Kevin,
    I'm so very very sorry to hear of your
grandfather's passing.
My thoughts and love to you and your family.
((((( Kevin)))))

Love,

Within this heart you'll find love

Copperbell
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5 posted 2004-10-24 11:27 PM


I'm so sorry to hear of your loss.  May you know peace in this time.
*Alli4000*
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6 posted 2004-10-24 11:41 PM


I am so sorry for your loss Kevin..I hope this can somehow help:

~Alli~

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