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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-10-23 01:39 PM

I am a
sleepy head girl
Laying within
billowed sheets
Head resting upon
pillow made
Of cloud soft dreams

Magic sand
dusts my eyes
Lashes locked against
Day dawn truths
Here I stay . . .

Enraptured--

In dreamscapes of
Sonata sounds drifting
A melodious struck promenade
Figures gliding in tandem . . .

we two--

Locked within
lover’s touch
Showered under
moonlit cascade
Our hearts strumming
in union
Our eyes locked in . . .

starlight gaze--

And we dance
as if one
Fantasy found in
celestial bliss
Within this land of
romantic myth
You and I . . .

Passion kissed –

Sigh

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-10-23 02:01 PM

writing softly, wishing not to disturb
this moment of peaceful slumber....

Shhhhhhhh, quiet please.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-10-23 02:08 PM

sigh is right

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2004-10-23 03:04 PM

*Editors note : This message is in sign language as not to disturb the slumber of poetess.

Romantic myth that becomes folklore maybe? Time sets the precedence. This was a softly beautiful read and I very much enjoyed.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-10-23 06:26 PM

Mumbling between sighs - speaking in my sleep - thank you dear friends, you make me smile -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2004-10-23 10:03 PM

Susan,
this is lovely . . .

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2004-10-24 12:39 PM

Beautiful Susan.
a wonderful read.

:-)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-10-24 12:50 PM

Better not tell anyone...or they might disturb...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-10-24 01:06 AM

Smiling, my friends, thank you - and sweet dreams tonight

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2004-10-24 01:13 AM

"I am a
sleepy head girl
Laying within
billowed sheets
Head resting upon
pillow made
Of cloud soft dreams"

I keep reading poems that are about sleeping...maybe I should take the hint?

lol.
Susan, beautiful poem.

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-10-24 02:16 AM

You and I . . .

Passion kissed –

Lovely Susan

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2004-10-24 07:09 AM

Wonderful Susan!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2004-10-24 08:52 AM

whoops..hope the harley riding through the living room didn't disturb you two..or my mexican spurs on the stairway...

or be falling down again with the armload of ball bearings in tin pans...

nice write ms suzz

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2004-10-24 11:41 AM

Mmm- thank you friends - and Dark - shhhhh-

hehe-

Hugs all - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2004-10-24 03:21 PM

When a sleepy head girl dreams .... we dream along.

And it is fun.

Sigh.

Love, Margherita

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

15 posted 2004-10-24 04:41 PM

Psst...okay guys. Let's not wake the sleepy heads. 1-2-3-4 (In a loud screaming rock anthem voice.) "Bang your head, Metal health will drive you mad..." Oh shoot...forgot to turn down the volume on my guitar amplifier! Dang, dang, dang! Well since you are up I'd just like to say I liked this piece Susan. It was definitely the nicest thing I have seen today. Now here let my band lull you back to sleep, "When you wish upon a star, does not matter who you are, anything your heart desires can come to you...."

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2004-10-24 04:41 PM

nice write

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

17 posted 2004-10-24 05:10 PM

Thank you all - smiles and laughter here - and EV2 - you crack me up - thanks for the fun reply - you and Dark - mischief makers

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

18 posted 2004-10-29 10:27 AM

beautiful Susan!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

19 posted 2004-10-29 03:08 PM

thank you Donna, dear friend -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

20 posted 2004-10-29 03:13 PM

the sensual side suits your talent with words...
well done ma'am

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

21 posted 2004-10-29 06:41 PM

Yes... *sigh*
This is absolutely beautiful.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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