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branden726
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0 posted 2004-10-23 12:31 PM


I wan't you to know
That you are my everything
You are my world

You've been with me through thick and thin
You've never done me wrong
You are my wind

Your beautiful smile
Makes me shiver everytime you blink those pretty eyes

I want to be there for you
There when you need me most
Hopefully I'll get your right and set your journey to coast

I love you hunnie
You are the world
Thanks for the wonderful day
I hope there will be many more.

© Copyright 2004 Branden Jacobs - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-23 11:49 PM


hope she read this tender sweet message
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-10-30 03:14 PM


Just keep writing as you want.

My personal opinion is that you have the quality and ability.

You cant please all the people, all of the time

Dave

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