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Owen

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Huan Yi
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Owen


The flowers
in the meadow...
shimmer
like soft tunes
in a gentle wind.

The clear sky
is pale and cool.

A gallant horse,
unsaddled,
grazes peacefully in the pasture.

How beautiful
the red rust
on the once bright armor...

that lies beside
the Spring green field.
© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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and you, sir, are very good at this.

You leave just the right amount of space between the lines for thought.

I enjoyed this very much.
Juju
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I like your style.

Juju
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Very much enjoyed this one.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Martie
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Huan Yi

This poem reminds me of a beautiful place in the Sierra Nevadas called the Owen's Valley.  Lovely!
Laoha
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What a picture!
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very descriptive! I like it!
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a painting and a picture and a image and a poem.

beautiful all the way.

love this.
 
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