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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-10-22 06:04 PM


We looked at walls of just stone
We melted the candles of Rome
We looked at eyes
Can we concede
We are

We danced in the magic of bliss
Music was your eyes kiss
We danced alone
In movements
To roam
We are

A majic of bliss
On your head you spun
Escaping the sun
Burning
You decorated
My horizon

On cushions we spun
Pumped low
For one
On a cushion of ideas
For in this world
Nothing is real

But only the cushion
Of your love


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-10-23 12:12 PM


magical indeed

fond idea of love and music, yes

Fagin
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2 posted 2004-10-23 01:00 PM


I could easily write some sinuey mood music behind this, in fact I could hear it as i read this... a keeper fer sure

Robert Rilling

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-10-23 03:10 PM


passing shadows

Fagin

If music be the food of love play on

The Bard

If love be the food of music

Eat well

Me

If you can manage "Mickey Loft's Boarding House" in your music as well - I know it's not the Eagles but every rock opera starts somewhere

Thanks

Dave


Margherita
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4 posted 2004-10-24 10:04 AM


I truly loved the music playing in this piece.

Love inspired you beautifully. As it always does ...

Love, Margherita

froggy
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5 posted 2004-10-24 11:36 PM


Hey Dave,
  Just two words.......Love It

:-)

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