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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-10-22 04:05 PM



Walking on the road to nowhere,
Finding out that nowhere never comes.
Treading softly on the path of desolation,
This path of my choosing…

The sunlight fades and I’m lost in darkness,
This darkness so deep, it swallows me whole.
A drop of sweat drips down my spine,
As I try to claw my way out of this pit.

Wounded from those reckless words,
That you keep screaming in my mind.
You stare me down & it tears me down.
It takes me & breaks me until –
I can’t breathe...I just can’t breathe…

Forever gone from my sight,
My love for you has died.
My heart has cleared away the debris,
That you left in your wake.

WOUNDED from those reckless words,
That you keep SCREAMINGin my mind.
You stare me down & it tears me down.
It takes me & BREAKS me until –
I can’t breathe...I JUST CAN’T BREATHE…

By-Myself and SilentTears

"I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-22 04:25 PM


Stac.....ouch......
HUGS, am here if you need me....

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2004-10-22 05:47 PM


...Ouch?....

"I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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