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The Sound of A Heart Breaking
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The Sound of A Heart Breaking |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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The Sound Of A Heart Breaking The room cold........... filled with exhausted silence. A light flickering casting ghostly silhouettes. The only sound is the beating of a heart- Someone's heart breaking Don’t you hear the cry of pain? The Keening. Listen! Sobbing, curled in a cocoon of sadness. Hear the cracking as if it where slices of ice on a winters pond- Breaking into millions of tiny little pieces Being crushed as if of no importance The labored breath The uncontrollable sob of torment. Listen! Can you not console this weary soul? Can you not lift their tired spirit to the point of starting to heal? Always in a hurry, running through life. Not noticing the beauty nor the pain. Listen! Don’t you hear the crashing of your tears pounding upon the pavement of life? Don’t you gentle reader- Hear the breaking of your own tender heart? Love and hugs coming your way BonBon  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Bonnie I think if you read this one in public, you could get arrested. Lovely words, vision and direction. Dave |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Thank you Dave you are such a sweetheart always reading and making lovely, gentle comments on my words. Hugs BonBon |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
That is because I consider your words are worth it. Dave |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Touched beyond mere compassion at this compassionate plea~ I often hear a heart breaking ... and the sound cuts me to the core every single time~ Thank you for reminding me of why I listen~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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