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Huan Yi
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Steven


Hey old man,
glad you came...
It’s been awhile.

Yes,
my wife is proud of her figure,
her looks,
which...
is an affluence
she was born with.

Still
into your Chekov?

Oh, she likes to read
the lighter things;

easy romances
and glamour magazines.
She doesn’t care
for unhappy endings.

My music
makes her sleepy.

She’s the kind of woman
you marry
after the woman you love
has left the world.

She’ll do.

Another drink?

Oh no,
of course not,...

I was simply tired
of being cold.

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


1 posted 10-21-2004 09:50 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

John, not sure if you wanted two voices...
or just one...
but it worked for me...
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Very much enjoyed overhearing this coversation.
Well done John.
Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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"I was simply tired
of being cold."

amen

Juju
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That hurts......

Don't settle.

Juju
littlewing
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5 posted 10-22-2004 04:33 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

You are quite the conversationalist, *smile*

My goodness, how sad:

She’s the kind of woman
you marry
after the woman you love
has left the world.


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"She’s the kind of woman
you marry
after the woman you love
has left the world." very loud!!! I never trust those kind of words. love...can be very simple unless man wants it completed. Simply heir related.
 
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