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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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moan of a repaired she. noise haunted by my inactivity to repeat sounds. why? an inquiry creeping through above my non-emotional self. designation faze a roam pulsating mute into the wrinkles of a smileless face. the echo explodes with the power of silence. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Intresting |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sir pandanov knoweth the score....verily doth he know it. You use words in a unique way, to do something unique, leading the reader with the echoes of your words...linguistic sonar. And these lines-- "... a roam pulsating mute into the wrinkles of a smileless face." --I can already tell they're going to hang in my mind all day. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
that...is a sound that befits the title... well done, Sir! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
the echo explodes with the power of silence. Such power it holds, love this pandaonov  and I am haunted |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you write some deep stuff I love that |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
silence deafens when stereoed echoing thoughts in surround |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"an inquiry creeping through above my non-emotional self." nodding here ego, super-ego, id a holy trinity You do nice work my friend. (told you I'd be reading more--  ) |
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