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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-10-21 09:21 AM

So many moons
floating between tinted leaves;
wind-rippled lake.

~P

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-10-21 09:22 AM

What a beautiful image, choshi...
absolutely gorgeous!

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

2 posted 2004-10-21 09:31 AM

Thank you...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-10-21 09:33 AM

So very beautiful Paul..
Very lovely indeed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-10-21 09:36 AM

you make these things seem so sensual....

you always move me Paul

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-10-21 09:38 AM

choshi
A delight to read.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-10-21 09:55 AM

Delightful vision choshi.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-10-21 11:18 AM

Beautiful Paul....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2004-10-21 11:52 AM

A wondrously perfect view...it gives me a longing to feel the air there among the ripples and the colors. EXQUISITE!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-10-21 11:54 AM

an awesome scene!

well done

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-10-21 12:01 PM

Exquisite!

EA

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

11 posted 2004-10-21 12:31 PM

Love the image you created for the morning

Dave

Sun breathing
tranquil morn
grey darkness

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2004-10-21 01:47 PM

ahhh
ooohhhh
you midnight moon
slinking across my empty sheets
how'd i ever sleep without you?

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2004-10-25 10:02 AM

thank you everyone for your kind comments....

~P

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2005-02-08 09:36 PM

This was perfect, Paul!

...jo

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

15 posted 2005-02-09 05:47 AM

Hi ~Jo, Thank you!

Its good to hear from you

warm wishes ~P

Kazm
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since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

16 posted 2005-02-12 06:47 PM

And you write haiku! This is so good!

Kaz

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

17 posted 2005-02-14 10:11 AM

Thank you Kaz.....

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