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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 10-21-2004 08:27 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


I don't think of you now
except those times
when I am buying gas
or at the dentist
or sliding down the street
without my jeans on
face down
over the chuckholes
with glass and gravel
and ants and snakes

just kidding hon
I think of you all the time
when doing good things
like burping
and scratching between my legs
and sliding the cover
over my new driver
they stare at me then
how I seem to enjoy that

and when I am with the dog
and we are in the park
smelling trees
and lifting our legs
he is jealous
cause I know to drink
more beer
to keep ahead of him
but he can lick
where I can't

and dang I miss you then

_____________

Dark

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 10-21-2004 08:32 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Made me smile ya did....

loved the morning humor.  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 10-21-2004 08:33 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine




Oh, what a way to start the morning,
with a hearty, heartfelt chuckle...

top o'the morning to ye, Sir!
Larry C
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3 posted 10-21-2004 08:40 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C



Excuse me Karilea while I belly laugh the start of my day! Too dang cute and funny.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kahlil
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4 posted 10-21-2004 08:59 AM       View Profile for Kahlil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kahlil

lol!
you make my smiles feel good

K
Susan
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walking the surreal


5 posted 10-21-2004 10:10 AM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

D- I smile at the humor, but if I read deeper, then I find the sorrow - think I'll just let the laughter flow for now -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
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6 posted 10-21-2004 11:01 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

"and dang I miss you then"



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In Your Poetic Mind


7 posted 10-21-2004 11:15 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

think we'd miss you if you werent around....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

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kewl write
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


10 posted 03-26-2011 11:52 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Damn, this is funny.

Alison
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