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Heights You Take Me To
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Heights You Take Me To |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Invention the techie Atmospheric qualities of nature Singing to bare earth, Which fires posterior Smooth…. Relentlessly warm Realism bursts through the door Sending it off its hinges Finishing up with luminosity Poems singing religious A bold lover fears submission Struggling achieved textures Lending itself to melodies Where translation wanders Playing home music There I wonder stoking your smile outlining your eyes touch is so important Quit the narcotic Forgetting essentials Floating on a plain Where secrets whisper True hearts Inhaling presence Rose of patience Bohemian cruise Allowing light With fervor…adoration Drinks on the house calling us home Every curve of life Profits disappear in the moment Awakening from slumber Dropping self-image Whispering today I love you things Look at something good Unshakeable questions Carving names into a tree What purpose has a desperate man? Was luck with me? Stroking my finger like a wedding band If you should part, I know I shall die Like a lovesick fragile bird Wearing glasses on my eyes and then.....? |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Lee I laughed while I read this. Nice and flippant. Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quit the narcotic Forgetting essentials Floating on a plain Where secrets whisper True hearts Inhaling presence Rose of patience ~*~ Each stanza, a poem of its own. Enjoyed, Lee! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
There I wonder stoking your smile outlining your eyes touch is so important oh yes, it is. Love this LeeJ Mxx  and I am haunted |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
There I wonder stoking your smile outlining your eyes touch is so important ******** INDEED!!! Through eyes, communication, and feel all wrapped in one. Touch comes in many forms for me, but you verse better than I could possibly do. ********** Superb write as I am finding all of yours to be. Great reading and great intrigue in each and every one. Very observant of life you seem to be. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I guess you can see that several of us tend to grasp onto the part of your poem about the importance of touch. It is, and you have brought that awareness to the surface of my mind. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lee Your words painted such a wonderful picture. I really enjoyed the read. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...the way you do the things you do...James |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Just reading this is amazing, but looking into each stanza, each phrase, each word... it is even better. I was gonna pull out my favorite to let you know, but it's too hard, I love it all. Love this write. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you are amazing and an inspiration |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LeeJ I got dizzy as I read down the lines of this poem...funny how descending words can ascend the mind. What a rush.... Love getting dizzy in this fashion.. ---------ice/ford ><> |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl again and then some ms penmister |
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