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skyshine
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0 posted 2004-10-20 03:29 PM



I couldn't have gotten this far in life if I was on my own
There's just too much to deal with--I can't do it alone
God is the one Who's given me the gifts I have today
The One Who brings me comfort and guides me on my way.
And God, we all need Your help whether we think so or not
For only You can give us the things that we have sought.
One comfort that I need, Lord, is not for my own sake
But for another that I know whose heart does now ache.
It hurts to see him hurt, and he does not know where to turn
He doesn't know how to give himself the comfort for which he does yearn.
All I can do is pray for him sometime throughout my day
That he will have the strength he needs to face what comes his way.
And I know he's not my child, Lord, so there's not much I can do
But You care for him more than I ever could, and so I give him to You
And although he may not be mine to give, I know he needs You now
In Your hands is the best place for him, because You'll help him somehow.
You will bring him comfort, Lord, the only one who can is You
Help him to put his trust in you and have faith strong and true.

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

© Copyright 2004 Elizabeth Costello Larson - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2004-10-20 04:39 PM


Elizabeth?

Besides this being the most absolute touching hymn I have read in a very long time, it worked.  This just comforted me, I needed this today . . .
I truly did.
It is beautiful, just beautiful . . .

And God, we all need Your help whether we think so or not


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2 posted 2004-10-20 04:41 PM


Very beautiful and yes, comforting.
Heart hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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3 posted 2004-10-21 01:31 AM


very touching...gives me comfort too...
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4 posted 2004-10-21 01:38 AM


thank you so much, this was very much needed here too, and for a friend who needs a hand to keep living


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5 posted 2004-10-21 03:25 AM




this is just stunningly written. Well done

and then He created the horse...

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6 posted 2004-10-24 10:55 AM


Very well done Skyshine, full of truth
and much comfort. Hugs.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

skyshine
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7 posted 2004-10-26 02:31 PM


Thank you all, I'm glad you liked it, it means a lot! *hugs*

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

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