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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-10-20 01:31 PM



chickens on simmer

pillows beckon in mid day

mortality gleams

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-10-20 01:32 PM


yep, thats definately how the first cold goes...but usually once I have a cold, it's with me the rest of the season...lol...
very well done Icebox

babygirlwlove
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2 posted 2004-10-20 01:33 PM


I hear you, icy!!!

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Martie
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3 posted 2004-10-20 01:39 PM


icebox

Chicken soup is a fine remedy...don't fall asleep and let it bubble down.  I hope you feel better soon!  

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-10-20 01:46 PM


Power on profit
Popeye tv
People stew

The soap calls

Like your words - as ever

Dave

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5 posted 2004-10-20 02:13 PM


enjoyed and hope you feel better soon


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6 posted 2004-10-20 04:21 PM


nothing like a little reminder of mortality for our bodies to temporarily fail us. Ick...I hate colds. They make me feel trapped.

enjoyed

Jenn

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


littlewing
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7 posted 2004-10-20 04:28 PM


Gosh, you just described a Buffalo winter, Icey
*grin*

feel better . . .

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-10-20 07:33 PM


icebox
A thoughtful write, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2004-10-20 07:50 PM


Oh, how those pillows do beckon when one is feeling under the weather!

Wishing you a speedy recovery!

Crying Into Tissue

EA

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2004-10-24 02:52 AM


feeling warm...lovely ice-man

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

pandonov
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11 posted 2004-10-24 04:53 AM


cold

passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-10-24 05:22 AM


a good write
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