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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-20 11:12 AM

I look now to winter
in her stilettos of ice
and barbed wire stockings

when she invites me to her couch
and leaves the wind of me in shreads
on her clothesless line

I envy the shivering of the river
as he is warmed by stone strewn banks
and gurgled to quiet in frozen pond

dare I dance my manbones there
at her window pockets emptyness
or will she pluck my prepuse warmth

with her sleet winged butterflys

_____

Dark

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-20 11:13 AM

The imagery in this is superb my friend....

you have done it again...

and I, I am sitting here smiling at this one....

Well done dark friend...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-10-20 11:20 AM

WOW....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-10-20 11:26 AM

Just seems to fit...
right?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-10-21 12:01 PM

dare I dance my manbones there
at her window pockets emptyness
or will she pluck my prepuse warmth

with her sleet winged butterflys

dare you not? will she? probably and you will love her for it.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-21 12:04 PM

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

6 posted 2004-10-21 12:48 PM

i never thought of winter to be clad in stilettos of ice and barbed wire stockings...i think it's wonderfully sexy and original...i loved the whole poem as well

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-10-21 04:28 AM

Now this is one of my favorites oh dark one!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-10-24 02:42 AM

WOW, those opening lines are just OMG, love them, love it all Mr D

doing the library thing

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2004-10-24 05:30 AM

Whew! Good one, DS! Whew and to the library!
miscellanea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-10-24 05:33 AM

sweet!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-10-25 11:36 AM

absolutely stunning!

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

12 posted 2004-10-25 11:53 AM

Nice tale you weave! This is a fine read! KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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