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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Dust we were patterns of snow not exactly the same each blanket covered one fell while the other just melted away |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey you . . . Been awhile . . . too long. Loved this. j. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Summer grasses— all that’s left of warriors' dreams Basho |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
one thinks of dust as just the stuff around the house when it has a much wider significance...and a snowfall could be just a dusting at that...  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"one fell while the other just melted away" Yes... So glad to have caught this one... Hugs... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Missing your words, Helen. *smile* |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
isn't that how it usually happens? lovely, Lady. All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
nicely written..much enjoyed! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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